One can, without a doubt, be subjective to any force that surrounds him…
Anything and everything can be influential, should you choose for it to be so….
A thought will linger in one's mind, if one refuses to demolish it…..
A sentiment will conquer your every being, should you wish to keep hold of it….
An action will determinedly be executed, should you promise your subconscious of yourself doing so….
The inspirational objects of life….
The simplest contemplation...
The simplest sensation…
The simplest prospect…
Sometimes… a mere hallucination…
Not one being can be weighed against anything else in this universe….
To everything, there is a separate set of standards…
Watching one evolve into an entirely different aspect…
An aspect that’s drastically dissimilar than what they initially began as….
It's merely one of the countless, phenomenal forces of life…
Allowing an even greater force to overcome you and possibly, at times, overwhelm you….
In the end, it all amounts to your personal choices….
What you have chosen….
Which direction to head towards...
Which life to pursue…
Some acts may be overlooked...
Some intentions may be misunderstood...
Some thoughts often go unspoken of…
Some confessions will always remain in the dark….
And yet the grass will grow, while flowers on the other end shrivel....
Secrets may be revealed, while treasures will forever be hidden....
In the end, no matter how many exterior layers you have selected… what's beneath, remains beneath…
Till' eternity…
Sunday, November 16, 2008
Oblivious Forces of Life....
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12 comments:
maybe we are just oblivious to the forces of life?
b3daiiiiiiiiin mako eternity....
yes indeed, who we are is a result of decisions we made.. everything is subjective.. great post, v intense..
i agree with you and Fastidious Babe
the end was great
You've done a spectacular job sculpting the form of this exceptionally deep piece.
Sharp writing!
Nice post :)
i would like to respond to f7ee7eely's comment.
We are eternal, whether we like it or not. Even if we die, it doesn't mean that we still cannot affect the world. Our actions, decisions and even our simple thoughts and ideas that slipped out of our tongues are still floating around space and air, From one younger mind to another, and so on. Names and Memories never die... We are still being affected by those who have made their (decisions, choices, actions) 2008 years ago.
This, got me thinking...
Thanks. ;)
f7ee7eely: "oblivious to the forces of life", that can be true on rare occasions... o aku eternity but u wont live to see it:p
fastidious babe: thnx fastidious.. but do u really think that everything is subjective? even if we try not to make it so?
ak-47: i liked the closure too:)
devil finch: coming from a sharp poet himself, that is indeed a flattering comment..
torn tool: i do agree that our actions are eternal, in a way that they'll forever affect our surroundings, regardless of how drastic that affect is...
manutdfanatic: glad i managed to cater to ur needs;)
Desmond, you need to start updating! ... Btw, Its last month over and over again :r ... will resolve soon ;p
Something in your Shisha?
eschew: ..why am i not surprised? it has become an inevitable occurence;p
Dr.Shale: Haha, I sure as hell wudint know!
i loved the post..
every word in it
Cloudy stars: welcome.. glad i was able to satisfy ur intellectual desires:)
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